Would you wear this if it was put on a shirt?

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Also, what should I change about it? The suggestions so far were:

- Change the font
- Make the font solid

Original non-vectored pic:
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Comments

nando
you should change it so the shark is not raping the gorilla... and maybe the gorilla could use more lipstick.
 
Brian117
Haha I would so wear that! You could maybe add some confetti falling all around and yeah change the font up a little bit.
 
Issac
Hmm, the balloons and briefcase doesn't look as good as they could (the sketch is MUCH better)

also, change font + make solid!

I would wear it :D
 
F
[quote name='DeathStrudel' post='3798804' date='Jul 28 2011, 02:18 AM']The original pic looks a lot better, and more shirt-worthy imo.[/quote]

Yeah :( I wanted to see what it would look like coloured but it looks kind of odd right now. Would it look good with the sketchy look?

I updated the original post btw to this:
sharkshirt3.png
 
T
[quote name='Feels Good Man' post='3798820' date='Jul 27 2011, 05:27 PM'][quote name='DeathStrudel' post='3798804' date='Jul 28 2011, 02:18 AM']The original pic looks a lot better, and more shirt-worthy imo.[/quote]

Yeah :( I wanted to see what it would look like coloured but it looks kind of odd right now. Would it look good with the sketchy look?

I updated the original post btw to this:
sharkshirt3.png

[/quote]

If you make this, I will buy it and tell more people. I know a bunch of people who would want one too :D
 
T
[quote name='Defiance' post='3798826' date='Jul 27 2011, 05:33 PM']I like it, though I could see people getting the wrong impression from it. :P[/quote]

But the gorilla has pants on. -.-'
 
Brian117
[quote name='Feels Good Man' post='3798820' date='Jul 27 2011, 08:27 PM'][quote name='DeathStrudel' post='3798804' date='Jul 28 2011, 02:18 AM']The original pic looks a lot better, and more shirt-worthy imo.[/quote]

Yeah :( I wanted to see what it would look like coloured but it looks kind of odd right now. Would it look good with the sketchy look?

I updated the original post btw to this:
sharkshirt3.png

[/quote]

If you're putting it on a shirt then the party time needs to go above or below the picture. Also NEEDS CONFETTI!!!!!!
 
T
[quote name='Brian117' post='3798842' date='Jul 27 2011, 05:40 PM']If you're putting it on a shirt then the party time needs to go above or below the picture. Also NEEDS CONFETTI!!!!!![/quote]

I think party time should be on the bottom :D and I agree, more confetti! 8D
 
DeathStrudel
[quote name='Feels Good Man' post='3798820' date='Jul 27 2011, 08:27 PM'][quote name='DeathStrudel' post='3798804' date='Jul 28 2011, 02:18 AM']The original pic looks a lot better, and more shirt-worthy imo.[/quote]

Yeah :( I wanted to see what it would look like coloured but it looks kind of odd right now. Would it look good with the sketchy look?

[/quote]
I think the sketchy look looks really good. Imo the colored one just looks kinda...for lack of a better word...cheap.
 
F
sharkshirt6.png



[quote name='DeathStrudel' post='3798862' date='Jul 28 2011, 02:59 AM'][quote name='Feels Good Man' post='3798820' date='Jul 27 2011, 08:27 PM'][quote name='DeathStrudel' post='3798804' date='Jul 28 2011, 02:18 AM']The original pic looks a lot better, and more shirt-worthy imo.[/quote]

Yeah :( I wanted to see what it would look like coloured but it looks kind of odd right now. Would it look good with the sketchy look?

[/quote]
I think the sketchy look looks really good. Imo the colored one just looks kinda...for lack of a better word...cheap.
[/quote]


Yeah, I know what you mean.
 
T
i love it! i think the colored version looks great, and the "cheapness" adds to the humor. but thats just my opinion.
 
Brian117
[quote name='Feels Good Man' post='3798856' date='Jul 27 2011, 08:52 PM']Changed according to the suggestions:

sharkshirt5.png
[/quote]

NOW it's shirt material :D. Something I would wear for fun no doubt. Print it on some black shirts too!
 
T
the only problem i have with it is the confetti touching the sharks tooth. just a bit of tangency that my OCD nit-picks.
 
Forstride
It needs more weirdness. Maybe like a bowl of fruit punch with a garden gnome in it, or a big speaker with an alien inside it. IDK...It needs to be more weird since it's already weird, just not weird enough.
 
Icealote
That looks awesome. I'd say throw in another animal next to them so people can stop thinking so dirty. Eg. a chicken with that blowing thingy perhaps?
 
Ace
I think you should make the monkey browner a la DK. You should also add some shirt sleeve's where his wrists are, to make it a bit more out-of-place-y. Think playboybunny costume "detached" sleeves, essentially :tpi:

Also, you should add larynx/"inner mouth" to the shark, to give the feeling that it's yelling something.



This will be the best party-starting t-shirt ever, btw.
 

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