The design is nice, but the copy needs some work. Check spelling, grammar etc.
I'll leave this here as a "look at what I did" kind of thread, rather than a "buy my stuff" kind of thread, though other staff members may disagree and remove this thread anyway.
I'm doing good, just made my first drink of the day, so better now, Captain and Coke today. I had to cut grass all day, then get my hair cut. I messed with my wifey, she knew I was going to get hair cut, and I went and bought a purple dyed wig, and came home wearing it, she freaked out, thinking I dyed my hair purple, was funny.