So, here we have a conversation with Nokia that loops endlessly until you tell her to stop.
1-10 is the first time through.
11-17 is the loop.
And 18 is loop ending.
I'm pretty sure the loop is supposed to be an exact copy of the first time through.
But either way, here are some things that should definitely be changed:
All instances of "Ice cream" should be "Kuzumochi".
All instances of "Chocolate syrup" and "Black honey" are supposed to be "Kuromitsu".
All instances of "Nuts" are supposed to be "Kinako".
And in 11&12, instead of butter, it should be more or less the same as 1&2, AKA Melon bread.
But like i said, I'm fairly sure the loop is supposed to be an exact copy of the first time through the dialogue...or at least close enough.
UPDATE: After comparing the loop to the first pass in JP, they are ALMOST identical. Voice acting sounds about the same, but there are small differences in the text.
And there's more!
19: "Coloumb's" should be replaced with "The".
20: Either change the exclamation mark to a question mark or change it to something like "So, it was you who gave financial aid to the hackers that deserted Zaxon."
21: "That's not like Ryuuji" should be "That's not like you, Ryuuji"
22: "Something 's really off with him" should be changed to "That's not like you at all".
23: "Statues" should be "Statuses".
24: "The other day they" should be "The other day, they".
25: Deleted.
26: "So went to fight" should be "So I went to fight".
27: Missing Punctuation.
28: The dots should be lower.
29: The second line is out of alignment.
30: The name needs to be shortened a little.
31-33: For 31&32, it'd be nice if the name was shortened just a little, but it's not really necessary. And then in 33, He's called something different from the name listed in 31&32.
34: "Into" should be "In to".
35: "T...hey" should be "...They".
36: "After, all!" should be "After all!".
37: "This really bad" should be "This is really bad".
38: "I'd hurry" should be "I'd better hurry".
39: "Conduced" should be "Conducted".
40: "Tell you one thing" should be "Tell me one thing".
I do have a bit more, but I think I'll post that tomorrow.
1-10 is the first time through.
11-17 is the loop.
And 18 is loop ending.
I'm pretty sure the loop is supposed to be an exact copy of the first time through.
But either way, here are some things that should definitely be changed:
All instances of "Ice cream" should be "Kuzumochi".
All instances of "Chocolate syrup" and "Black honey" are supposed to be "Kuromitsu".
All instances of "Nuts" are supposed to be "Kinako".
And in 11&12, instead of butter, it should be more or less the same as 1&2, AKA Melon bread.
But like i said, I'm fairly sure the loop is supposed to be an exact copy of the first time through the dialogue...or at least close enough.
UPDATE: After comparing the loop to the first pass in JP, they are ALMOST identical. Voice acting sounds about the same, but there are small differences in the text.
Post automatically merged:
And there's more!
19: "Coloumb's" should be replaced with "The".
20: Either change the exclamation mark to a question mark or change it to something like "So, it was you who gave financial aid to the hackers that deserted Zaxon."
21: "That's not like Ryuuji" should be "That's not like you, Ryuuji"
22: "Something 's really off with him" should be changed to "That's not like you at all".
23: "Statues" should be "Statuses".
24: "The other day they" should be "The other day, they".
25: Deleted.
26: "So went to fight" should be "So I went to fight".
27: Missing Punctuation.
28: The dots should be lower.
29: The second line is out of alignment.
30: The name needs to be shortened a little.
31-33: For 31&32, it'd be nice if the name was shortened just a little, but it's not really necessary. And then in 33, He's called something different from the name listed in 31&32.
34: "Into" should be "In to".
35: "T...hey" should be "...They".
36: "After, all!" should be "After all!".
37: "This really bad" should be "This is really bad".
38: "I'd hurry" should be "I'd better hurry".
39: "Conduced" should be "Conducted".
40: "Tell you one thing" should be "Tell me one thing".
I do have a bit more, but I think I'll post that tomorrow.
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